Writing blog T2 W1

This week for writing I Had to write a story based on Hansel and Gretel and had to use different punctuation.

Here is the link to that task: Link to task

I also Had to write 9 sentences using 1 adverbial phrase, 1 Intensifier and 1 sight which  is describing what things look like.

Here is that task:

Pip could sense danger ahead and there was no time for him to stand and watch this big truck about to roll over a blind old lady. Pip had to do something. The truck looked like a big bulldozer slowly flattening everything in its Path. Pip had to move fast so he bounded over to the old blind lady and with his mouth grabbed the bag and pulled the little old lady to safety. Pip was very relieved that he saved her from getting rolled over into the cement and was filled with excitement and was very proud of his accomplishment. 

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Have you ever Used these three things in your writing ? "1 adverbial phrase, 1 Intensifier and 1 sight"