Storybird
Hi everyone i decided to do this post because storybird is a fun way to write a story
To set up storybird you just have to search it up and then you sign in. When you've signed inIts quite complicated because when you've chosen what you you want to write about it's hard to make another page.Also you have to make a cover.Here's a story so you get the idea
One STORMY night i got back home from rugby training UNTIL I found out that I was walking over an abandoned gold mine so i started to run away but then i said to myself if there is still gold in there i could be famous so i decided to go in and there was a animal or a human in there i couldn’t really tell because it was homing after a few minutes from a distance i could see a gold lite shining from a distance...I started to walk closer and closer towards the light and as i was about to pick it up something went straight threw my body and began to turn into...A mummy so for the rest of my life if been hiding and trying to despise myself but it never worked i even tried to go to school and i just got kicked so now no matter what i do i'll just get cooled toilet boy.So from now on scientist are trying to figure out who i am even thought I told them that i'm a human the fell down a cave and turned into a mummy but they can't understand me anymore so i'll never know if i'm going to ever be able to travel and see the world ever again...Unless i go back to the cave and try to reverse the curse wait who am i kidding i must be crazy. Actually i could try it couldn’t I.so i waited until it was midnight so i wouldn’t be seen And as the lightning danced across the sky it struck me ripping all of the toilet paper of and... then i was back to normal.I liked living the normal life way better than the old one but whenever i say the word mummy the moon was a diamond in the night sky the end
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY STORY
good bye
Hi Joey,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your story. Imagine being called 'Toilet Boy', that would be different than Joey or Joey AKA the Kangaroo.
I liked reading your story, the only thing I would look at improving on is your sentence structure and punctuation. Many of the messages you wrote in your story rolled into one big sentence. You need to try an use more full stops and commas. ALso try to use a spell checker. If the website you are using to write your story in does not have a built in spell checker then look for one online or get an old fashioned dictionary. Do you know what a dictionary is? When I was at school 30 odd years back that's all we had to check that our spelling was correct.
I'm looking forward to your next story.
Craig
Hi Joey, great job on your blog this week. Remember to use capital letters but I really enjoyed your story.
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