Reading T3 W2

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Writing T3 W2

This week for writing we have been writing about the story of Hansel and Gretel here are my two story's:

Story 1

“ I'm scared, ” said the little girl. “It will be fine” Said the boy, “nothing is going to happen to us” The boy knew that their parents wanted the Two kids to desiper. Suddenly in the distance they saw a house made out of gingerbread “ I'm feeling hungry maybe we should eat some “ Says the little girl, “ I agree”

Says the boy. On the side of the house they could see a demented chimney and a unsdable door. They could see a bit of candie sliding off the side of the house. They were living a dream.

Story 2

Hansel was getting fatter and fatter as the day blew bye like the wind, the witch was getting hungrier and hungrier and could not wait to eat this little boy. The boy got so fat that he couldn't eat anymore caramel - cakes or crunchy - carrots. What the witch didn't know is that the little boy was fooling the witch with a bone but since the witch's eyesight was soooo bad that she had mistaken it as the little boy's finger.

Have you ever written the Hansel and Gretal story like I have before?

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Reading T2 W2

last week for reading We learned about the 9 fantastic's, the 9 fantastic's are:

 

We had to use 2 of each in our reading follow up.

here it is:

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have you ever used these five fantastic's before?

Writing blog T2 W1

This week for writing I Had to write a story based on Hansel and Gretel and had to use different punctuation.

Here is the link to that task: Link to task

I also Had to write 9 sentences using 1 adverbial phrase, 1 Intensifier and 1 sight which  is describing what things look like.

Here is that task:

Pip could sense danger ahead and there was no time for him to stand and watch this big truck about to roll over a blind old lady. Pip had to do something. The truck looked like a big bulldozer slowly flattening everything in its Path. Pip had to move fast so he bounded over to the old blind lady and with his mouth grabbed the bag and pulled the little old lady to safety. Pip was very relieved that he saved her from getting rolled over into the cement and was filled with excitement and was very proud of his accomplishment. 

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Have you ever Used these three things in your writing ? "1 adverbial phrase, 1 Intensifier and 1 sight"