This week for writing we have been writing about the story of Hansel and Gretel here are my two story's:
Story 1
“ I'm scared, ” said the little girl. “It will be fine” Said the boy, “nothing is going to happen to us” The boy knew that their parents wanted the Two kids to desiper. Suddenly in the distance they saw a house made out of gingerbread “ I'm feeling hungry maybe we should eat some “ Says the little girl, “ I agree”
Says the boy. On the side of the house they could see a demented chimney and a unsdable door. They could see a bit of candie sliding off the side of the house. They were living a dream.
Story 2
Hansel was getting fatter and fatter as the day blew bye like the wind, the witch was getting hungrier and hungrier and could not wait to eat this little boy. The boy got so fat that he couldn't eat anymore caramel - cakes or crunchy - carrots. What the witch didn't know is that the little boy was fooling the witch with a bone but since the witch's eyesight was soooo bad that she had mistaken it as the little boy's finger.
Have you ever written the Hansel and Gretal story like I have before?
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